Process of making chocolate bars
The diagram elucidates an information about process of making chocolate bars and the pie chart depicts how the price of a chocolate is divided among those involved in the process.
After analyzing the whole illustration, it becomes apparent that in first step, coca beans are taken and are then sent for grinding. Along with this, waste is discarded, then after cocoa powder is converted into cocoa liquour. Further, it is for industrial chocolate and second goes through pressing to form cocoa powder and another one is cocoa butter which is mixed with sugar and used by factories for the purpose of making chocolate bar.
Shifting attention towards the second illustration, it is further evident that major share of cost is received by ingredients and overheads being 37%, then closely followed by supermarket by 34% of share. Farmer who produces cocoa beans receives very less only 4%. Besides, 15% and 10% is received by tax and chocolate company respectively.
Hence, every step is equally important and interlinked with each other. Omission of any step will halt the whole process and least profit is granted to farmers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, hence, if, second, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14054054054 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6065826655 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648648648649 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0388648096 43.030603864 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296531668488 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100862487442 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156423877108 0.0843802449381 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182696751866 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.181041986743 0.0819641961636 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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