PROCESS OF MAKING SUGAR FROM SUGARCANE
The diagram shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.
The given diagram illustrates the manufacturing process of extracting sugar from sugarcanes. The process does require both man and machinery to work together
The initial process of extracting sugar from sugar cane starts from the process of growing sugarcane in sand at shallow levels of water for 12-18 months. After which , the fully grown sugarcane is harvested either by tractors or by hand. The harvested sugarcane is then taken to a crusher to produce sugarcane juice
The next step in extracting sugar is the recently obtained sugarcane juice is then poured into a “limestone filter” that is used for purifying the juice from all insects and soil. Then the purified juice is placed in an “evaporator” which uses heat to convert the juice into a syrup with sugar crystals present in it. Then the syrup mixture is placed in a centrifuge that separated the sugar crystals from the sugar syrup.
Finally, the sugar crystals are stored in a container and is kept to dry and cool to create the by-product that is sugar. Extracting sugar is long and tedious process and requires work done by people and machine
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s of water for 12-18 months. After which , the fully grown sugarcane is harvested ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68439196998 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5426274385 43.030603864 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.539987245123 0.215688989381 250% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.233291651102 0.103423049105 226% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140734788238 0.0843802449381 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.324486317166 0.15604864568 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120789432439 0.0819641961636 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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