The proportion of carbohydrates , protein and fat in three different diets
The pie charts describe the percentage of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three distinct types of diet.
Overall, it is clear that the proportion of carbohydrates almost stands at 1st position in all of diets while the opposite is true for that of fat.
Carbohydrates is the most popular in three diets. Healthy diet for sport contains the most carbohydrates with 60%, 10% more than healthy diet. It is notable that the rate of carbohydrates and protein in average diet shares 1st rank , standing at 40%.
On the other hand, fat always takes the least percentage in all of diets. In particular, the proportion of fat in average diet and healthy diet is 20%, 5% more than that in healthy diet for sport. Moreover, this figure for protein in healthy diet and healthy diet for sport is 30% and 25% respectively and stands at 2nd place in these diets.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... protein in average diet shares 1st rank , standing at 40%. On the other hand, fa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, while, in particular, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 703.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 149.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71812080537 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7058865871 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 73.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489932885906 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 200.7 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4381833922 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.875 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407057675821 0.215688989381 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195623051846 0.103423049105 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071051159358 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26961877023 0.15604864568 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290293180655 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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