PUNISHMENT IN CRIME

Essay topics:

PUNISHMENT IN CRIME

Criminal has a various type which actualized trough the case, and it is classified based on the level into less, moderate, and high crime. Obviously, on deciding the punishment to justice crime, the judge must consider it as well to receive the big final. Plenty assumption separate in two ways opinion about punishment execution.
The first assumption is about public opinion to fix punishment for every type of crime. Actually, citizen needs a written and steady rule to set up every type of crime with determining a suitable punishment. It perhaps meant there is no excuse for the suspect who did the criminal action and erected the wary effect.
In any case, the opinion focus on determining every aspect carefully, such as understanding a suspect situation, seeking a motive of the suspect, and another reason that created in a criminal mind. This opinion encourages us to avoid even a little misunderstanding about deciding the final punishment.
From my humble perspective, the punishment is a crucial decision and the judge must execute it carefully with great wisdom. Undoubtedly, every country must have fix rules to establish the punishment based on the crime type. In the same way, the rules also need to consider every aspect especially the reason how the crime occurred and of course, this way will be able to avoid personal assumption.
In summary, every person deserves to receive a fair decision and justification. Beside it, the rules and legality definitely figure out how the country's credibility was organized.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, if, so, well, in summary, of course, such as, in any case, in the same way

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 965.302439024 133% => OK
No of words: 250.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.152 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85437488778 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 106.607317073 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 283.868780488 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1188316704 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0769230769 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 1.13902439024 878% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302421345625 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113829339777 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117622940785 0.0843802449381 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166032111827 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139944919998 0.0819641961636 171% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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