the quantity of Japanese who travel out of Japan from 1985 to 1990 and the market proportion of Japanese tourist traveling to Australia

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the quantity of Japanese who travel out of Japan from 1985 to 1990 and the market proportion of Japanese tourist traveling to Australia

The charts provide information about the quantity of Japanese who travel out of Japan from 1985 to 1990 and the market proportion of Japanese tourist traveling to Australia

Overall, both of the quantity of Japanese tourist travelling abroad and the percentage of tourist from Japan who travel to Australia experienced an upward trend, and had some fluctuations. The final year has more participation rather than at the beginning of the period.

The number of Japanese travelling abroad rose sharply from around 5 to virtually 11 millions between 1985 to 1990, a rise of about 6 millions in a 5-year period. From 1990 to 1993, a slight decrease was shown in the number of tourist from Japan who travelling abroad, but a steady recover to 12. By 1995, by contrast, the one travelling abroad had increased significantly to approximately 15.5.

The percentage of Japanese travelling to Australia improved dramatically from 2 to just under 5 percent from 1985 to 1988, rising by about 3. A steady drop was experienced in the one who travel to Australia, rebouncing back to just above 6 between 1988 and 1993. However, by 1994, the percentage of Japanese tourist to Australia had plummeted steadily to 6.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.045 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93679672432 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.0490324989 43.030603864 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.142857143 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5714285714 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.640203540462 0.215688989381 297% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.269504308049 0.103423049105 261% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.226801443423 0.0843802449381 269% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.468199496286 0.15604864568 300% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.215263859192 0.0819641961636 263% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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