A recent survey shows the number of people traveling through London's underground station boarding Victoria terminal at different times of the day.
The considering linear chart illustrates the data about the figure of people traveling to Victoria terminal at different times of the day by Landon's underground station boarding. The specific figure recognize in the times which is directed and reasonable description.
Generally, it is manifest that on the working hours the extremes people are use the traveling but on the other hand, littlest people are do traveling at the night time.
At the start, the 100 to 200 people have been like to travel on 6a.m. to 7.a.m. Apart from this, the most 400 mankind are travel through Landon's underground station boarding on 8 to 9 a.m. . Moving forward, the trend has been fluctuate 250 to 200 people on 10 to 12.pm . Moving ahead, neither 1pm nor 2pm trend are constantly same at 200 humanity.
As far as direction, it concerned is trend either 2pm to 3 pm are remain same approximately 190 people have been traveled. Therefore, the trend fluctuations arise 4 to 5 pm are 180 massis to 200 mankind travel. As well as, the people travel from 6 to 7 pm at agin peak point 400 people are traveling. Moreover, the people travel at night time for 8 pm to 10 pm have been decrease from 200 mankind to 100 respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the littlest'.
Suggestion: , the littlest
... use the traveling but on the other hand, littlest people are do traveling at the night ti...
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Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s underground station boarding on 8 to 9 a.m. . Moving forward, the trend has bee...
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Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ground station boarding on 8 to 9 a.m. . Moving forward, the trend has been fluc...
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Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'fluctuated'.
Suggestion: fluctuated
...m. . Moving forward, the trend has been fluctuate 250 to 200 people on 10 to 12.pm . Movi...
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Line 5, column 270, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...uctuate 250 to 200 people on 10 to 12.pm . Moving ahead, neither 1pm nor 2pm trend...
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Line 7, column 67, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
...ncerned is trend either 2pm to 3 pm are remain same approximately 190 people have been...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, apart from, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69483568075 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72097396109 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553990610329 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7329605947 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298171878903 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125700175 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108859277807 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202482645908 0.15604864568 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662719554217 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.