Recyling of cotton t shirts
The given process illustrates the journey of cotton t-shirts that passes through different stages such as production, consumption, and disposal.
Overall, it is a time-consuming and complex process. The intervention of human is indispensable for the completion of the entire cycle of cotton t-shirts.
To begin with, cotton that is harvested on a large scale is picked by a cotton picker. Then, it is forwarded to a place for the conversion into bales. Later on, those bales are transported by lorry to the manufactures for the next stage. The bales are not only threaded but also weaved into a piece of fabric before getting shaped into a finished product. Nonetheless, the fabric is colourless, the treatment of colour before designing is a pre-requisite. After colouring, the same is pushed
for cutting and sewing. After the transformation to a proper size and shape, the cotton t-shirts are moved towards packaging. The packaging is done as per the demand of a seller.
At last, those packages are dispatched to a shop for consumption. The consumers buy those t-shirts as per their choice and wear them. After their usage, they are directed towards disposal in different forms. Although there are varied ways of disposal, the best way is recycling.
- The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. 67
- Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both the views and giv 61
- expenditure on a movie-making process. 84
- PIE CHART ON DIFFERENT EXPENDITURES ON MOVIE 78
- Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both the views and giv 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nonetheless, so, then, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1058.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1359223301 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98625373623 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597087378641 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.157636349 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.5333333333 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7333333333 22.9334400587 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.09268292683 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197373846667 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578511698622 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874946037796 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117510980221 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572241391854 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.