Recyling of cotton t shirts
The given process illustrates the journey of cotton t-shirts that passes through different stages such as production, consumption, and disposal.
Overall, it is a time-consuming and complex process. The intervention of human is indispensable for the completion of the entire cycle of cotton t-shirts.
To begin with, cotton that is harvested on a large scale is picked by a cotton picker. Then, it is forwarded to a place for the conversion into bales. Later on, those bales are transported by lorry to the manufactures for the next stage. The bales are not only threaded but also weaved into a piece of fabric before getting shaped into a finished product. Nonetheless, the fabric is colourless, the treatment of colour before designing is a pre-requisite. After colouring, the same is pushed
for cutting and sewing. After the transformation to a proper size and shape, they are moved towards packaging. The packaging is done as per the demand of a seller.
At last, those packages are dispatched to a shop for consumption. The consumers buy those t-shirts as per their choice and wear them. After their usage, they are directed towards disposal in different forms. Although there are
varied ways of disposal, the best way is recycling.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nonetheless, so, then, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13235294118 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99051348364 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602941176471 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6627023841 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.8 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6 22.9334400587 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.09268292683 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149497971915 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420018872905 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739588306996 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0701469679204 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666435100836 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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