Essay topics:
significant rise in world trade
Nowadays,there is a significant rise in world trade so some goods which are consumed by people have to be made in others parts of the world and be transported over a long distance, while this trend has many benefits, but I believe that over case creates several negative impacts
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
Nowadays,there is a significant rise in world trade so...
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Line 1, column 127, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y people have to be made in others parts of the world and be transported over a l...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 33.7804878049 21% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 230.0 965.302439024 24% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 49.0 196.424390244 25% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69387755102 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.64575131106 3.73543355544 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77160589737 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 44.0 106.607317073 41% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.897959183673 0.547539520022 164% => OK
syllable_count: 77.4 283.868780488 27% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 22.4926829268 218% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 230.0 112.824112599 204% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.0 22.9334400587 214% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.0 5.23603664747 344% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290302890343 0.215688989381 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.290302890343 0.103423049105 281% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290302890343 0.15604864568 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.2 13.2329268293 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 61.2550243902 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 10.3012195122 217% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.81 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 10.0 40.7170731707 25% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 11.4329268293 232% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.9970731707 196% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 11.0658536585 199% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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