Some argue that music mainly serves as a way for individuals to reduce their stress and anxiety.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people assume that music mainly contributes to their energy replenishment and anxiety reduction. From my perspective, although I compromise that this is the primary function of music, music also plays a crucial role in reinforcing motivation to promote in their life
It is understandable why several people believe that music enables humans to become less stressed and anxious. To begin with, most songs are composed with a harmonious melody and meaningful lyrics in order to assist individuals to alleviate their feelings of tension and apprehension which are extremely essential to students and employers due to their heavy workload and multiple tasks that they must finish to keep up with progress of other colleagues. Additionally, while commuting to work or driving back home, people may get stuck in the congestion which is able to make humans aggressive and lose their temper, so with the assistance of music it will help people to stay calm and enjoyable during driving their vehicles. To meet the needs of many people, some music applications are created to allow people to listen to music regardless of where they are which is also considered as way prevent humans from being stressed and concerned.
However, another beneficial aspect of music that cannot be denied is to help boost motivation to develop beyond in their life. Indeed, People will have problem with coming up with new ideas to make the production more attractive and improve the quality of production together with creating more revenue to the enterprises, so music can be a significant tool to enable individuals to address this issue with countless initiatives from sweet-sounding melody of the song. Moreover, people often want to give up when they have to face up to some challenges and find difficulty in overcoming hardship due to the deficiency of motivation, in that circumstance music is considered as the vital key to encounter this issue because will help to minimize tightness and nervousness and provide people with numerous informed solutions to cope with difficulties which can contribute to their later success.
In short, the fundamental advantage of music is to help people relieve stress and reduce the feeling of anxiety. However, its contribution to bolster motivation in some aspect of daily life is undeniable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...eduction. From my perspective, although I compromise that this is the primary fun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, as to, in short, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.15609756098 380% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 5.60731707317 446% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 33.7804878049 219% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1949.0 965.302439024 202% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 373.0 196.424390244 190% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22520107239 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 3.73543355544 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88497761377 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 106.607317073 192% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549597855228 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 283.868780488 217% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.107249989 43.030603864 263% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 194.9 112.824112599 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.3 22.9334400587 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17428022835 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885283698106 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548097294669 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126596830155 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427443131987 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.9 13.2329268293 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 61.2550243902 42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.3012195122 183% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.06136585366 124% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 40.7170731707 263% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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