in some countries, children are expected to study more time both in and after school. advantages and disadvantages of this trend
Most students have homework to at home after learning at school. So obviously that they are expected study more at home. This trend could be both benefit and adverse.
Studying both in and after school will help students to have basic knowledge of any subject. So that they will easily get good marks in examinations.
that is the advantages, what about the disadvantages of this trend. studying both in and afer school means that students will have to devoted a huge amount of time to do it. in my opinion, spending excessive study time might cause negative effects on both children and the society. young people tend to getting tired and bored after studying for a while. they feel less happier and may suffer psychological of mental illness. even worse, some data show that the rising rate of suicide and anti society behavior could be the consequence of this matter. thus, spending too much time studying make children lose the opportunities for socialize through outdoor activities. it also have a huge impact to the society like causing lower employment rate. student will lack of fundamental communication skills, interpersonal skills and team work.
in conclusion, studying both in and after school can benefit but it also be a huge impact to children's life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, thus, while, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01886792453 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63655195177 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61320754717 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.8983030546 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.9333333333 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1333333333 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371716352411 0.215688989381 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111894479657 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797719049444 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217189905187 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524888853382 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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