In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tern countries leading to an increase in cardiovascular complications, diabetes a...
^^
Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: MIGHT_PERHAPS[1]
Message: Use simply 'might', 'perhaps'.
Suggestion: might; perhaps
...n. Firstly, in doing so, politicians might perhaps limit the consumption of products from ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'reduced'.
Suggestion: reduced
... governments, tobacco taxes have surely reduce the use of cigarettes reducing the risk...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, may, so, as to, for example, i think, in fact, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 965.302439024 149% => OK
No of words: 285.0 196.424390244 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06315789474 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83454484988 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 106.607317073 171% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638596491228 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 283.868780488 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7789647472 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.25 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227911073542 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681997142625 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031663008411 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116850815893 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309048470961 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 40.7170731707 199% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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