Nowadays, some people exclude meat or fish from their diet. They do it in order to take care of their own health as well as the planet. Although I am not a vegetarian, I totally agree with this wise thinking and I admire people who decide to do it.
In fact, such a diet has remarkable advantages for the health. In the recent decades researchers have found that red meats, which are, to name just a few, beef, lamb and pork, increase the risk of cancer and things are considered to get worst when processed meat is consumed. Due to its preparation this type of meat contains some chemicals, namely nitrates and nitrites, that are known to be responsible of certain diseases so that any doctor, who wants to tackle seriously the issue, will not recommend food such as Italian salami or bacon. Hence, it is clear that switching from red meat to the white one as the chicken would be an intelligent and careful action for our selves.
Furthermore, the consumption of chicken is better not only for our health but also for the one of the entire world. Another important factor to take into consideration is the emission of methane by the cattle, in particular cows. It is surprising that cows produce a large amount of methane, a greenhouse gas which contribute together with carbon dioxide to the raising temperature effect. Moreover, the problem with methane is that is even much stronger than CO2 and could bring to catastrophic damages in the future.
To conclude, the consumption of red meats is harmful for ourselves and for the destiny of our planet. What I have think about is becoming vegetarian because it is the best way of eating at the present and people have to be educated to new lifestyles including a change in diet, which will be beneficial for everyone and the huge variety of plants and animals populating the Earth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 608, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...switching from red meat to the white one as the chicken would be an intelligent a...
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Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'thought'.
Suggestion: thought
... the destiny of our planet. What I have think about is becoming vegetarian because it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, well, in fact, in particular, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70588235294 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61666141574 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600619195046 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5783791208 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.923076923 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8461538462 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179709767986 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637602277861 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550533223 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103493540571 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406004268713 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.