In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, a large range of people decided to live alone. In recent years, most people, especially in the developing countries, likely to opt for living alone. What I personally think is that it has some disadvantages while some people think that it also has several advantages. In this following essay, we will discuss both the benefits and drawbacks.
In the first place, living alone has a few disadvantages. Obviously, living alone is costly due to the increase in population and housing price. It will be also more difficult to find a house at a suitable price. Moreover, living alone means that we can't receive any help from our families. Therefore, whenever we get troubles, overcoming these issues is very hard. In addition, living solo solely can be very dangerous if we are too young because thieves are able to break into our house at any time to steal valuables and money, sometimes they may even kill us. Last but not least, when living alone, people can feel homesick, they miss all the members of their family. Consequently, this lifestyle is not their favorite choice anymore.
Despite having some drawbacks, this living trend also brings people lots of advantages. Firstly, we will be very comfortable if we live alone. Also, there are private things that we need to do, while we do not want to let others know, such as writing diary, eating snack all day and so on. Secondly, for those who have been pampered by parents since childhood, when living alone, they will learn how to be more independent and more mature. Thirdly, living alone can give us a hand in bringing a lot of opportunities in order to discover yourself such as strengths, weaknesses, motivations, behaviors, and desires. Finally, living alone can make us appreciate others more. Taking apart for a long time will actually make us more cherish. Also, we will recognize everybody with a whole new angle. It also means that people will love each other more. Accordingly, there will not have fightings and quarrels anymore.
To sum up, living alone has not only the advantages but also the disadvantages. However, I personally believe that we should live with parents or relatives until we are old enough to live alone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, while, in addition, such as, to sum up, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 1.00243902439 1496% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 5.60731707317 713% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1837.0 965.302439024 190% => OK
No of words: 374.0 196.424390244 190% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91176470588 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 3.73543355544 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63643007368 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 106.607317073 203% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577540106952 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 283.868780488 211% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 8.94146341463 268% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3677241955 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5416666667 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5833333333 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 5.23603664747 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 1.13902439024 1229% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179147657997 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577872682598 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364323219664 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120560194474 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379472159478 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 40.7170731707 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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