It is widely believed that human behaviors are mainly effected by the impact of laws. While some people agree with this school of thought, I would argue that besides laws, there are different factors also leading to the changes in people behaviors.
Admittedly, laws, nowadays, have become indispensable body, which support the Government to control and supervise the behavior of citizens. This is because the full weight of laws have an enormous power to adjust the way all of the society members behave without any exceptions. Take traffic laws as an example. Thanks to the presence of laws, which is a direct symbol of the government, people when participating in traffic roads, regardless of the motorcyclist or pedestrian, have to adhere to the relevant laws, which renders them traveling on the right lanes and stopping at the traffic lights to avoid heavy fines or the confiscation of driving licence. In terms of business, the majority of enterprises and corporations have a tendency to run along profits and pay little attention to the serious consequences in the environment and public health. Therefore, through adopting strict law system, it will act as a deterrent prevents businessmen from illegal commercial behaviors, which can lead them to embark on the criminal road.
Despite these arguments mentioned above, I strongly believe that some indicators such as living conditions and people's awareness are also able to change the way citizen behave. Firstly, living conditions have a crucial role to play in supervising people's behaviors. For instance, because children are the mirror images of the society, If they were born and brought up in a fresh environment with the absence of crimes, they will develop according to a positive way. Secondly, the consciousness of people also contribute to the construction of their personal brand via their behaviors. Without a doubt, well-educated people who can clearly distinguish the right and wrong, are prone to behave suiting social norms in any circumstances.
In conclusion, human behavior can be changed not only by current law system, but also by other factors including their living conditions and awareness.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 221, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ave an enormous power to adjust the way all of the society members behave without any exce...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 33.7804878049 163% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 965.302439024 190% => OK
No of words: 347.0 196.424390244 177% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27665706052 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 3.73543355544 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8882436156 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 106.607317073 195% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599423631124 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 283.868780488 200% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.4764678998 43.030603864 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.785714286 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7857142857 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 5.23603664747 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25492389169 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818181727508 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744274300546 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178357121764 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100096898719 0.0819641961636 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 40.7170731707 258% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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