The given picture depicts the process in which snows rainwater is collected for the purpose of drinking water in a particular Australian town.
Overall, there are a total of 4 distinct stages to transform rainwater into sweet water for domestic uses, beginning with collecting water from nature and ending with delivering processed water to each house in an Australian town.
At the initial stage, two main sources of water, including snow after melting and rainwater, are collected through an available water pump system in local area. After that, water from nature experienced the first filter process by a modern equipment called water filter before draining to an enormous storage chamber under the ground.
Following that, a large amount of water from the storage area is transported to a new region used for water treatment. At the pint of the stage, various kinds of researched chemicals are applied to release components and dust and elaborate harmful bacteria for public health. Finally, processed water is returned to Australian houses via pump system and ready for drinking.
- The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany France Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005 84
- Many people believe that university students should pay tuition fees in full themselves because they gain education for their own benefit and not for the society To what extent do you agree or disagree 47
- The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops 78
- Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems To what extent do you agree or disagree What other measures do you think might be effective 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 22, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'totals'?
Suggestion: totals
... Australian town. Overall, there are a total of 4 distinct stages to transform rainw...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25862068966 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58227670718 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614942528736 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3980212908 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.714285714 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395925567844 0.215688989381 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185848551819 0.103423049105 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110297859758 0.0843802449381 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2624724142 0.15604864568 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087087849224 0.0819641961636 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.06136585366 124% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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