Some people believe that residents are responsible for the place where they live to be clean and tidy. Others believe that government is the responsible. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people hold the opinion that dwellers are responsible to keep the surrounding area neat and clean, while some says that it should be done by the government. In my perspective, this is the responsibility of government but, as a nation, people should contribute their efforts for the betterment of entire country.
It is very dire necessity to provide healthy and good environment to citizens to protect from dirty environment such as, garbage, pollution and others that ultimately creates many diseases which could be more dangerous for the people. In order to keep the area neat and clean, government is responsible to manage these all things instead of residents. Whereas, most of the people says that every individual person does not have enough time to manage each and every thing owing to inadequacy of time and work overload. In addition, some people concern that government need to make any specific department to pertaining garbage that can collect all garbage from around the country, as well as, in most of the countries government collect these all kind of things by the help of technology like, heavy machineries which shows, the more you spendthrift the more comfort can be acquired.
On the other hand, number of people says that people are contributing their immense efforts in the way of taxes in order to stream line the situation of country. Whereas, it has seen many times in underdeveloped countries that people are bearing dirty environment even near their houses which is ruining their lives along with future generation. Survey depict that it has evenly mistakes by both of them for instance, not to give proper taxes, not performing proper work, shortage of senior officers, illiteracy rate and many others. At the end, government needs to take stern steps on above stated points that eventually will be worthwhile for the country.
To sum up, government need to resolve these issues on urgent basis which is very harmful for the people, Along with this, government should form the criteria and involve intellectual people wherein they may find better way for the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 708, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...the country, as well as, in most of the countries government collect these all kind of th...
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Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o stream line the situation of country. Whereas, it has seen many times in underdevelop...
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Line 7, column 241, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ey may find better way for the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 3.15609756098 444% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 5.60731707317 482% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 3.97073170732 453% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 965.302439024 183% => OK
No of words: 347.0 196.424390244 177% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08645533141 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 3.73543355544 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65893212072 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 106.607317073 178% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547550432277 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 283.868780488 191% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.2215165652 43.030603864 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.454545455 112.824112599 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5454545455 22.9334400587 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3636363636 5.23603664747 217% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21803167833 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846757221727 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042673733425 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140353245392 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404997154801 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 40.7170731707 196% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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