We are becoming increasingly depends on computer. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly
planes. What things they will be used in the future? Is this dependence on computers are good thing or should we be more
suspicious of their benefits?
Survey depicts that people are swiftly relying on computers as compare to past While it was made for some official work, multiple industries along with controlling crimes. I, however, believe that using computers is far beneficial for every people owing to briskly switching the world into technology.
To begin with, I would like to outline the some advantages of using computers alongside gadget items which plays most significant role in this era for instance, education sectors are teaching their students through laptops as well as give assignments which can be done by computers. Furthermore, students are getting done their assignments by using internet that actually has become more essential for every people due to rapid extension of technology. In addition, plenty of people are being connected via video chat and calls with their family who lives in two different countries.
On the other hand, it can be seen that tendency of doing work as a freelancer has been increased in last decades which demonstrates the value of technology and computers. But, it has number adverse consequences as well that can be involved children into bad things for example, crime, negative use of internet and others. Many adepts assert that excessive use of internet and computer can be the worst for children henceforth parents need to look after their children as well.
In conclusion, my inclination supports that using computer is quite good and has become basic need for surviving the world whether it’s related to the education, office or something else but, not to overlook its disadvantages as well.
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| 2019-08-17 | Muhammad Waleed Khan | 61 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...begin with, I would like to outline the some advantages of using computers alongside...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to overlook its disadvantages as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24324324324 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72109571512 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629343629344 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.0611750086 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.888888889 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7777777778 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.8888888889 7.06120827912 268% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163634115946 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709135523752 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338313191629 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951605276534 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354485280491 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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