Some people think that animal testing to advance medical research for human use is necessary. Others think it is not right. Discuss both of these views and give you own opinion.
Some people hold the opinion that advance medical research has become mandatory for human bodies by testing on animals, while rest of the people says this is not good. In my opinion, testing on animals and research need to be conducted for the betterment of medical sectors, alongside research and testing is the only way to find best solution.
To begin with, I would like to outline the advantages of animal testing to escalate advance medical research for the improvement of human lives that eventually will be worthwhile in future for the people. Furthermore, thousand of diseases are existing around the globe which could not be tested on human body owing high risk factor of death, as well as most of the diseases was found in last couple of decades that took much longer time to reach the conclusion which could not be experimented else animals. One of the obvious benefits of testing on animals is that by farming people can increases the quantity of animals accordingly in case of shortage. Moreover, every doctors and researchers need something to experiment on new diseases to find the better solution for the nation which is the need of every country.
On the other hand, it has many adverse consequences if people are conducting research on those animals which are less in quantity as well as they called national animal of the country. For instance, the Pakistan national animal name is "Markhoor" which is less in quantity and government does not allow anyone to take this animal for research. In many countries villages has become tourist place due to bulk quantity of the animals wherein people came from across the work just like South Africa.
In conclusion, advance medical research is much important in order to find best solution for the human's body but, on the other hand government need to focus and form the criteria of utilizing these animals for research, along with this, stern steps need to be taken against those people who hunts animals for the enjoyments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: find the best
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Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
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Suggestion: find the best
... research is much important in order to find best solution for the humans body but, on th...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e who hunts animals for the enjoyments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 33.7804878049 169% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 965.302439024 173% => OK
No of words: 337.0 196.424390244 172% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96142433234 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 3.73543355544 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62200050206 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 106.607317073 162% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513353115727 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 529.2 283.868780488 186% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.2490506253 43.030603864 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.2 112.824112599 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.7 22.9334400587 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0 5.23603664747 286% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296457121557 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137358925805 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079986446252 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20992646163 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687134560783 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.2329268293 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 61.2550243902 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.3012195122 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 40.7170731707 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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