New editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in news paper. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?
Nowadays, new editors prefer to telecast something attractive on television along with in print media. There are number of factors which are being focused while broadcasting. I, however, believe that the news could be more beneficial for nation instead of showing negative things to the people who has become a trend now.
To commence with, broadcasting and print media plays most significant role among the nation which spread the current news among the world henceforth people are always be awarded of current affairs as well as it has become necessary for everyone. Additionally, it seems to be good when people learn plenty of things by news channels or through print news. Whereas, some people believe that news is one of the fastest messengers around the globe to spread widely news within a short time. Furthermore, there are number of element which are being focused from new editors during telecast for instance, avoid violation, negative things, consideration according to international level and many others.
In addition, survey depicts that people has become habitual of watching negative things on news channels that eventually is not good for the country which is even being noticed by international people. For example, different country's news editors telecast each and every thing about the country whether its relevant to the crime or something else which obscure the credibility of the country.
In Conclusion, broadcasting news is far beneficial for surrounding people but it has number of adverse consequences as stated above hence, government need to form the criteria of telecast news and avoid spreading crime or bad news that creates negativity among the children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...by news channels or through print news. Whereas, some people believe that news is one o...
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Line 7, column 276, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... creates negativity among the children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34701492537 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72201684347 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563432835821 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.957207689 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.3 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238304046008 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108638413962 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443436796077 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160957763466 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325006634371 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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