Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while other think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The Modern Technology has become very essential to surviving a better life among the world. Whereas, some people assume that technology makes people friendlier while some says not. This essay will agree that modern technology would be far beneficial to spend compete life in future.
Firstly, the essay will discuss the importance of modern technology that eventually helps the people to spend a batter life. For instant, Google, YouTube and LinkedIn provides latest information of the world that reprimanded to the people to spend more and more time. However, majority of students are striving to learn different skills by the help of Google that could not afford the fee of tuition. In addition, these attribute of the technology also engages the business men to check the market trends accordingly.
On the other hand, most noticeable thing was found that so many people have become addicted to watch unnecessary things on mobile that make their habits worst with the passage of time, while the vast majority of teenagers spent mostly time on games and internet that make them less sociable. Whereas, parents should know the detrimental health effects to use internet excessively.
To summarize, technology is the best thing to make people levies very easiest that provides the path to spend a good life. Furthermore, people should also consider their disadvantage but not to overlook the benefits.
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| 2019-05-08 | Muhammad Waleed Khan | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...urviving a better life among the world. Whereas, some people assume that technology mak...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...be far beneficial to spend compete life in future. Firstly, the essay will discuss the...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'provides the latest'.
Suggestion: provides the latest
...r instant, Google, YouTube and LinkedIn provides latest information of the world that reprimand...
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... internet that make them less sociable. Whereas, parents should know the detrimental he...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ntage but not to overlook the benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, so, whereas, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25221238938 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56837349453 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610619469027 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 283.868780488 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1556774986 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.909090909 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0909090909 5.23603664747 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306893283468 0.215688989381 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101529554131 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908809408575 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173305754942 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379680126219 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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