In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this case?
What can be done about this problem?
Technological agriculture has been developing significantly and result various products to complete society needs while there is remaining issue about starving in some states. Based on some journal researches state that a number of poverties correlate with difficulty to get food for daily life.
On the society side, one of the reasons why many poor people and increasing each year are unemployment. Some corporations have nowadays fired their workers as result of economic crisis in big countries, moreover income remains during recent time whereas the need prices are high, so they have to struggle it. Another factor which can be happened is presumably the number of residents rise particularly, as consequence, supply for food is diminishing.
To solve the issue, basically this is government’s problem how to manage subsidy and share it to people who need help. A program such as providing job vacancies for unemployment is also needed, while facilitating about work skills. In the other hand, ministry of education could encourage growth of entrepreneurship activity in university, and thus vacancies can be created by itself. In addition, government may be able to campaign how to arrange family and pregnant.
Whether agriculture advance has helped people to sufficient food may be being discussed as a attempt which is not seen for the result nowadays. There are some reasons such as economic crisis and population growth, therefore it is needed role of government for addressing the issue through encouraging entrepreneurship program in university or school and campaign to public about family planning.
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...mpaign to public about family planning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 965.302439024 143% => OK
No of words: 252.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46031746032 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06847403115 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 106.607317073 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 283.868780488 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3957108305 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.090909091 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 5.23603664747 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151659399697 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561578362676 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456257737511 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849881924018 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032573085008 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 40.7170731707 196% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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