Being a celebrity – such as a famous film star or sports personality – brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
Being a Celebrity is a job providing many exposures in public as a person being model of society. I believe that everyone will see all of things having been famous people such as personality, everyday life, and others. If we view that as a phenomenon disturbing their life, I think it is issue which damages them. However, we realize that the benefit is more.
One of the main reasons why being celebrity giving many benefits is big income which is obtained from their jobs such as being actor or actress in film, getting sponsor, and TV talk show. Economically, they will not have problem as they get much money after working. For instance, Raffi Ahmad as a celebrity in a day can receive money as much as 100 hundred million after making a deal for talk show. It is a big number as income commonly.
Another reason why being famous people giving many benefits is getting relations with important figures for establishing business or joining government. There are not many people which can get the things except they reach many exposures in public. For example, recently we know the information from news that Aldi Taher as ex-actor of film joins political party in Perindo to be government. It is not difficult by a celebrity.
In conclusion, there are many things which are able to get for everyone being a celebrity especially when they get many attentions from society. They can utilize their exposures for getting great income or connecting with important people, so it is good chances to obtain more benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85440613027 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58468807395 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544061302682 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7913530285 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215125513241 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074985572163 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700417129243 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139119626576 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559292222186 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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