The sports center that you regularly visit has a problem with some of its equipment. Write a letter to the center manager.
In your letter
• tell them about the problem;
• describe how it has affected you;
• explain why it should be fixed soon
Dear Sir,
I am writing to inform you that I visited your sports center last Tuesday evening and my experience of changing rooms was completely disappointing.
The main reason for my dissatisfaction is changing rooms' cleanliness and hygiene. In the changing rooms, sports goods are kept anywhere, and athletes' used clothes are hanging in lockers.
In one of the best sports centers in town, such an unmanaged changing area disgusted me. I literally felt like vomiting when I inhaled the dirty smell coming from players' used clothes.
I would like to suggest some suggestions to improve this condition. First of all, strict rules should be implemented in changing rooms to ensure players are keeping their sports wear and accessories properly after using them. Secondly, there should be some fines or punishment for breaking the rules. Finally, daily cleaning should be done in all changing areas to maintain a clean and hygienic atmosphere.
Yours faithfully,
Dr. Ajay Pate
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, second, secondly, so, as to, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28662420382 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76966815817 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.713375796178 0.547539520022 130% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6345465374 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156750691197 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556855969159 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494749009995 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909333081746 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631338511034 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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