In the future, it is expected that there will be a higher proportion of older people in some countries. Is this positive or negative development?
It is considered that the percentage of the older population will increase more than the young people in several years in some nations. I will explain in this essay why it has benefits and drawbacks that affect society for a long time.
On the one hand, there are some advantages to having more elders. First of all, old people are able to support parents and look after children when they are up to their ears in work. Not only that, it is also useful for children who are accustomed to receiving knowledge and stories from tradition. Besides that, they also have more time to engage in charity work such as gathering together in order to collect garbage. Traveling in the local area, for instance, will occasionally make the traveler lose his or her way. However, they are helped by the older generation who often take them for a walk or get exercise outside on the street.
On the other hand, they have a wide range of disadvantages. Firstly, it makes adults bear a greater financial burden when they do not have enough money or when they have many children to pay daily expenses. Additionally, it makes the government shoulder much more responsibilities because they have to pay pensions and build nursing homes to care for the older people. This leads to a higher tax burden for citizens and can put a strain on government resources. It also means that fewer resources are available to invest in education and other social services.
In conclusion, the growing rate of older people in countries like Japan is a negative development. It has an impact on a lack of labor to contribute and improve communities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, look, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77224199288 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65946563001 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601423487544 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4728148459 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.4 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143924733319 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491356841108 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614950269735 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107886348232 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599344547088 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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