Student expenditure
The bar chart compares how much money students in the United Kingdom participating in post-secondary schools spent in selected categories in 1996, and 1999.
Overall, the class of 1996 paid more on essential items of daily life, and course related areas, while the class of 1999 tended to allocate more on recreational activities.
In 1996, living expenses such as house renting, food, and bills accounted for nearly a half of students’ budget, which was 10% higher than that of 1999. Tuition fee in 1996 also took the higher proportion of student’s expenditure than in 1999, with exactly 10% and approximately 7.5% respectively, and spending in non-essential travel also experienced the same pattern. Interestingly, the class of 1999 hardly spent money on taking care of their children, while it took about 2% of 1996 class’s allocation.
Students in 1999 paid more on entertainment activities, and non-essential customer items, which eventually accounted for nearly a half of their budget, higher than about 10% of 1996’s figure. Furthermore, schools also required students to traveled more in 1999 than in 1996.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, second, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 963.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4406779661 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17859755183 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581920903955 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7561188595 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.571428571 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165381996421 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862964414748 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650841498491 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953161007537 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587724503081 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.