The table and chart below provide a breakdown of the total expenditure and the average amount spent by the students per week while studying abroad in four countries

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The table and chart below provide a breakdown of the total expenditure and the average amount spent by the students per week while studying abroad in four countries.

The distribution of the total expenditure on Accomodation, Tution, Living cost and amount spent on studies by the students weekly in four countries(A, B, C and D) is depicted by the rendered blended chart. The data is calibrated in US dollars.

In the overall perspective, it is ostensible that the cost of studying in nation A is higher than others. Living cost of students in A, B, and C is maximum except D whereas they are paying less for Accomodation.

Turning to the details of the spending of academics in foreign states, highest figure of 875 US dollars can be seen in A. The second place is of B where the expense is 735. While D shows the lowest numbers(435 dollars). 540 dollars is charged by C for learning per week.

In the bar graph, however, it is clear that in A, B, and C, the share of Living cost is more as compared to other categories, the count is 430, 350 and 275 respectively after a week. It is lowest(225) in D, on the contrary. The difference of exact 60 dollars in between A and B, along with 40 dollars among C and D is evident for Accommodation. But every Week, payment of Tutions of territories A, B, C, D recorded 350,320, 250 and 235 dollars correspondingly.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , the highest
... spending of academics in foreign states, highest figure of 875 US dollars can be seen in...
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...place is of B where the expense is 735. While D shows the lowest numbers435 dollars. ...
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...per week. In the bar graph, however, it is clear that in A, B, and C, the sha...
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Suggestion: than
...and C, the share of Living cost is more as compared to other categories, the count...
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...d B, along with 40 dollars among C and D is evident for Accommodation. But every ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, whereas, while, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47706422018 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93286839582 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56880733945 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.6490654366 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3333333333 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174107956292 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530504907589 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090223187409 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112169802411 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106416668269 0.0819641961636 130% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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