The table and chart below provide a breakdown of the total expenditure and the average amount spent by the students per week while studying abroad in four countries

Essay topics:

The table and chart below provide a breakdown of the total expenditure and the average amount spent by the students per week while studying abroad in four countries.

Overall, it is evident that studying in country A is the most expensive. In addition, international students in all countries, with the exception of country D, are required to pay the highest amount of money each week for living expenses while spending the least on accommodation.

Studying in nation A costs $875, which is $140 and $335 more expensive than studying in countries B and C. International students studying in country D, on the other hand, must pay a substantially lesser fee ($435) than those in the other three nations.

The cost of studying abroad in nation A is $875, which is $140 and $335 higher than studying in countries B and C, respectively. International students in country D, on the other hand, must pay much less ($435) than those in the other three nations.

Overseas students in country A spend an average of $430 per week on living expenses, while students in country B spend only $350 per week. In comparison, the cost of lodging in country B is $60 higher than that of country A, at $280 per week. Both countries have tuition rates that exceed $300 per week. The expenditures for the three categories are all less than $300 in the other two countries, with country D having the lowest amount at around $200 per week.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...nternational students in all countries, with the exception of country D, are required to pay the high...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A cost' or simply 'costs'?
Suggestion: A cost; Costs
...on accommodation. Studying in nation A costs 75, which is 40 and 35 more expensive t...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 30, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ations. Overseas students in country A spend an average of 30 per week on living exp...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while, in addition, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60273972603 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8060763254 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438356164384 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4303104119 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.8 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295293458022 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138401735607 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581714333423 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183720214532 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692953350348 0.0819641961636 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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