The table and bar graph compares the time spent by men and women performing household chores everyday with recreational activities in the UK.
In a general overview, women spent more minutes performing their daily chores in all categories except repair, whereas men had more leisure minutes in a day than women.
With regards to the leisure activities, both men and women use up their maximum free mins by watching television, video or listening to radio, the former with 137 minutes while the latter with 19. Men preferred sports with 15 mins more than women with 11 mins. In contrast, reading was almost equally preferred by men and women, 18 and 19 mins respectively.
on the other day, Women spent the most average mins by doing cooking and washing, while men spent almost less than half of women spent in this category. In addition to this, cloth washing, and ironing activities consumed more women mins almost two times than men, with 27 and 9 mins respectively. In contrast, repair is the only activity where men consumed their maximum mins in performing daily chores than women.
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- The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States Canada the United Kingdom and Japan in the year 2009 78
- Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible What do you think are the advantages of attendi 73
- Some people say that children should go to school as young as possible while others believe that children should go to school of at least 7 years old Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
- The bar graph shows the total manufacturing production in percentages Asia Europe and the rest of the world 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...n and women performing household chores everyday with recreational activities in the UK....
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
... women, 18 and 19 mins respectively. on the other day, Women spent the most ave...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
whereas, while, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96739130435 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48454580636 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538043478261 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0928382188 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.25 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123460902741 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702025192784 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756506010732 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108913455404 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874637465495 0.0819641961636 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.