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The table below compares the average number of vehicles using three roads.
The table gives figures regarding how many automobiles averagely passed through three roads from 1993 to 2002. Over the period, the auto flow rate per hour had increased for all three paths. In average, the Long Lane was the most popular way while there was a least tendency for Harper Lane to be used.
In 1998, Harper Lane were used by merely 82 vehicles per hour, the least number of the whole table, hitting the high number of 910 in 1998, before witnessing a sharp plunge to 193, with some fluctuation, at the end of the period. Long Lane which was second popular road in 1993 by 400, in spite...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 259, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...as the most popular way while there was a least tendency for Harper Lane to be us...
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Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...er the last two years. Great York Way , ranked as the first during the primary ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'regarding', 'second', 'so', 'whereas', 'while', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.224137931034 0.268076937826 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.125 0.116061578633 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0818965517241 0.0759168565197 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0258620689655 0.0366838410393 70% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00862068965517 0.0131127313244 66% => OK
Prepositions: 0.176724137931 0.155750635184 113% => OK
Participles: 0.051724137931 0.0379272487307 136% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.25483259883 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0215517241379 0.0210936926555 102% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.116379310345 0.0948980150116 123% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00862068965517 0.00967000014798 89% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1173.0 1161.00487805 101% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.9 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61244019139 5.90752243213 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73763899035 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.277511961722 0.337110787985 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.162679425837 0.247514529752 66% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.105263157895 0.171178102325 61% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0765550239234 0.112407865282 68% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25483259883 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.546246751206 116% => OK
Word variations: 65.7798698287 49.3433353143 133% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 26.125 23.0094962315 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7865116617 42.9750493124 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.625 135.714022679 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.125 23.0094962315 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.875 0.689975730869 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 42.3929425837 47.7609492067 89% => OK
Elegance: 2.83783783784 2.94281807926 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370134377822 0.418131533498 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.140578739383 0.181151798455 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.094397947146 0.0850326197045 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.606741119708 0.706616315825 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.155263386981 0.157042692854 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172398733629 0.228904883108 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0990060254247 0.108899403657 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.361565923649 0.367819155151 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0522249375807 0.0812612215331 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267146554755 0.316326947829 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376839353234 0.0921553760075 41% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.14146341463 263% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.08536585366 49% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 0.956097560976 314% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 8.0 Out of 9