The table illustrates how many employees and factories were in England and Wales in a period of half of a year ( from 1851 ).
Overall, the sum of male workers is more than female during 50 years except for the second survey in 1861. Both the trends of male and female staff members decrease sharply in the first and second decade, then they fall gradually in the rest of the period. On the contrary, the number of industry sites rise through time, especially from 1861 to 1871 ( from 227 units to 622 units )
First of all, the volume of male members is far more than female in the first research (287,100 to 190,000) while in the second research, the female had more than male (160,000 to 131,780). However, the number of male employees rises again in the remaining years but is not as dramatically as in 1851).
The total of labourers who work in the industries has a downard trend despite the growing number of the cooperatives (477,100 workers to 225 factories in 1851, 291,780 to 227 in 1861, 140,123 to 622 in 1871, 126,132 to 721 in 1881,
105,000 to 625 in 1891, and 61,000 to 600 in 1901)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, second, then, while, except for, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49748743719 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30455527163 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562814070352 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.1994985469 43.030603864 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.166666667 112.824112599 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.1666666667 22.9334400587 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8333333333 5.23603664747 264% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113344541807 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707938468951 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756976999055 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773307999284 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719399811717 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.82 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.4 10.3012195122 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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