Nowadays, as technology has been through a breakthrough which is the Internet, users are able to communicate with each other easier than ever before. According to recent surveys, business meeting, discussions and training are available on websites or applications on the Internet, some believe that leads to great benefits but some say the opposite. This essay will discuss both views and show the importance of online works.
First of all, modern applications on smartphones and social media online such as Facebook, electronic newspaper or e-mail have brought the most convenient ways to hold meetings and assembles. In specific, thanks to the net covering over the world, members of corporations or companies can face-to-face discuss when they settle down in their own stay like home, workplace with only a laptop and Internet connection. Due to that, organizations will save a considerable amount of transportation fee and some expansion fees such as renting a hotel for meetings and its addition tips for service. For example, it is simple to create a group chat online, then text the members through the appliances and choose suitable time and start the call which allows meeting directly in person by the camera.
Great advantages always come with high risks. With the worldwide spread, there are definitely some errors in remote areas like the mountains or forests where Internet availability is at the lowest rate. Consequently, this will become a huge obstacle for video calls or online training. Moreover, customers also have to be in danger of getting scammed by fake accounts which advertise their training courses online. However, with the incredible modern technology process, these troubles will soon be solved.
In conclusion, the undeniable benefits from the Internet for business is getting more and more irreplaceable in recent years and possibly in the future which outweigh the solvable disadvantages
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38283828383 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85609958499 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646864686469 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0697244973 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.461538462 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135568603916 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450562269238 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045565222746 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085969258388 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513784393555 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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