The table below gives information about a restaurant s average sales in three different branches in 2016 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Overall, the branch in Georgia Street took the lead in the number of sales, while the one in Drake Street had the lowest transaction. The tables also shows the data of other selling categories of each branch.
To specify, Vancouver Georgia Street had the highest number of transaction, followed by Vancouver Dunsmuir Street and the last one was Vancouver Drake Street, with 854, 750 and 390 respectively. The branch in Georgia Street also ranked top 1 in other categories: 10,69 dollars in average transaction value, 405 numbers of eat-in transactions average take-away slots. The average of take-away slots was 449, which means this number was higher than that of eat-in. The most popular dish of this branch was chicken burger.
Though stayed at the second place, the restaurant in Dunsmuir Street recorded a transaction value lower than the one in Drake Street with a value of 5.61 dollars, whilst the latter earned 9.02 dollars. The average of eat-in numbers of the restaurant in Dunsmuir Street had the same phenomenon with the one in Georgia Street, which was less than the average take-away slots. Chicken wings was the most popular item that people liked. On the other hand, what was measure Drake Street was vice versa. The eat-in slots of this branch was more than the take-away ones, with 200 and 190 respectively and chicken pasta was the most liked dish here.

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Average: 1.1 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 463, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... number was higher than that of eat-in. The most popular dish of this branch was ch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95238095238 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39590738175 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47619047619 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 321.3 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6050756201 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.058539470849 0.215688989381 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0306320343176 0.103423049105 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0262184123624 0.0843802449381 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0508826909017 0.15604864568 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00884651598951 0.0819641961636 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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