The given table shows the numbers of students enrolled at Manchester University in three different years.
It is clear that the total number of student enrolments increased rapidly over a 80-year period. On the other hand, nationalities of international students became more diverse in Manchester University.
In 1967, the number of enrolments quadrupled to 1133 students, compared to just 327 students in 1937. This figure continued to rise by over 5000 students attending the university in the following 40 years. The rates of man and woman in enrolments fluctuated throughout the period. Female students only contributed 35% of the total students in 1967, but increasing to more than a half in 2017.
Percentage of those coming from nearby Manchester was seen a significant downward change, with 55% of enrolled students falling to just around 1% over the period shown. By contrast, the university became a more popular choice for overseas students. There were mild fluctuations in the proportion of international freshman from 1937 to 1967, ranging between 6% and 7% of students. However, in 2017, 32% of the total enrolments were overseas students coming from 102 countries.
- the pie charts and table gives information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000 78
- The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car bus or train between 1970 and 2030 67
- The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego California and the rest of the world 73
- the pie charts and table gives information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000 86
- The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades Although some of these changes have been negative the overall effect of this technology has been positive What are your opinions on this 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...udent enrolments increased rapidly over a 80-year period. On the other hand, nati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35828877005 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95313078625 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2299589164 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.0909090909 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217148249052 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888457720246 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501377720313 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151315339795 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472917757767 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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