The table below gives information about student enrolments at Manchester University in 1937, 1967 and 2017.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table provides information about the number of enrolments at Manchester University in 1947,1967,2017.
Overall, the number of enrolments increased with an increase in the year. Although there was a slight decrease in the percentage of female enrolments in 1967, a noticeable increase has been observed in 2017. In addition, the percentage of enrolments far from Manchester and overseas enrolments got higher as the year's pass.
Growth in the total number of enrolments was observed as the year's increase, accounting to 327,1133,6254 in 1937, 1967, 2017 respectively. A modest decrease in the number of the enrolled female candidate was observed in 1967 when compared to 1937, accounting to 35%,45% respectively, however, a considerable increase was seen in 2017, to 55%.
On the other hand, the number of enrolments of more than 40 miles far from Manchester increased as the year increases, accounting to 55%, 85%, 98% in years 1937, 1967, 2017 respectively. Furthermore, in 2017, 32% of the enrolments were international from 102 countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46951219512 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27385652188 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506097560976 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2115074373 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.125 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226818350442 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128044142504 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113453027227 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193454511391 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131913447792 0.0819641961636 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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