The table below gives information about UK independent films.
The bar chart illustrates that independent films of different kind in UK and Republic of Ireland in 2012.
Overall, drama and documentary had the highest number for release the film. From total released, while only biopic was at the bottom of chart with the lowest number of movies. At the same time earning from the comedy was the highest in 2012.
As the graph shows, there was the highest number of movie released at 35 for drama and documentary categories, that was the largest number of total reused. Whereas, the earning from these categories stood at 8.3% and 2.9% respectively. Afterwards, 26 comedy movies was released in 2012 with the percentage of 17.6% since, this categories had the highest earning, at 45.4% from ticket sales.
By contrast, the number for horror films group accounted for about 14 that was exactly double than crime, at 7. But there was a huge difference in their income around at 20.2% from horror movies compared to 4.7% from crime shows.
Moreover, thriller movies had only 8.8% of total released which was sums of romantic movies, at 3.4% as well as other movies, at 5.4% in 2012. Lastly, only 1 biopic film was released in 2012 where the number was one fourth compared with 4 movies of action genre. Meanwhile, the trend for revenue income was reverse, 9.1% income from sale of biopic movie tickets, higher than 4.1% income from action category.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, lastly, moreover, well, whereas, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88185654008 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35089642982 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527426160338 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7153159162 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4166666667 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0237080169472 0.215688989381 11% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.013749547201 0.103423049105 13% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344989604401 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.029834737325 0.15604864568 19% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468040773886 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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