The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

The table illustrates the proportion of consumption on three different product categories in five different countries, namely Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey in 2002. It is noticeable that food, drinks and tobacco attract the highest consumer expenditure in all five countries, while leisure/education category has lowest customer spending.

It can be seen that the customer spending on Food/Drinks/Tobacco in Turkey accounted for the highest percentage, which was 32.12%, following by Ireland which spending percentage was 28.91%. The proportion of Italian spending on Clothing/Footwear was higher than the other four countries, peak at 9%, while its spending amount on Leisure/Education was pretty low, about one-third of the amount spending on Food/Drinks/Tobacco.

On the other hand, the consumer spending on Food/Drinks/Tobacco in Sweden was the lowest percentage compared with other countries, which was 15.77%, nearly half of this rate in Turkey. In addition, the percentage of Spanish spending on Leisure/Education was lower than 2%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 321, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the lowest'.
Suggestion: has the lowest
...tries, while leisure/education category has lowest customer spending. It can be seen th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, third, while, in addition, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.93464052288 4.92477711251 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.75807331504 2.65546596893 142% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562091503268 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0015782545 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.333333333 112.824112599 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164363738334 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930066937143 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788324803932 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123611945734 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763484678207 0.0819641961636 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.2329268293 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 61.2550243902 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.41 11.4140731707 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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