The table below highlights data on the number of travelers using three major German airports between 2007 and 2012.
The given table presents information about change in the number of visitors in three distinctive airports, including Dusseldorf, Frankfurt and Berlin Tegel, in term of millions of travelers per year from 2007 until 2012.
Overall, it is clear that the number of visitors in three airports significantly increased through the year. From the initial year 2007 to five-year later, Frankfurt still the most popular and by 2012 it reached a peak of 69.3 million of travelers, exceeding the number in Dusseldorf and Berlin Tegel, which had only 45.6 million and 43.3 respectively. Turning to Berlin Tegel which started at the lowest point of 17.3 million, followed by a gradual rise to 39.9 million in 2009. Over the last three year, it remained stable at 43.3 million.
In addition, the figure for Dusseldorf experienced a dramatic rise to 48.2 million in 2009, before hitting a decline to 37.1 million and 33.2 million in 2010 and 2011 respectively. However, it went through a period of dramatic increase to 45.6 million of travelers in 2012.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gh a period of dramatic increase to 45.6 million of travelers in 2012.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, still, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07558139535 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71821445665 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575581395349 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1409178758 43.030603864 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.714285714 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140580639432 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798581200054 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673325346921 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113202194538 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625369682742 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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