The given pie charts illustrate about the five different responses given by the visitors in the surveys germane to their visit to Ashtown museum that signifies if the visitors are satisfied or not. The data is recorded by the reactions given by both the visitors before and after a year of refurbishment of the museum.
It can be seen overall that prior to refurbishment, 70% of the 74 thousand visitors gave negative comments in which almost half of the comments (30%) said that the visitors were very unsatisfied. During the same year, mare 25% of the visitors gave positive response whereas the rest of the 5% seemed neutral in their reactions to the surveys.
But, after a year of refurbishment, the surveys as conveyed by the graph show that the positive responses dramatically got increased to 75% of 92 thousand visitors in which 35% were very much satisfied by their visit. However, even though the amount of neutral reactions remained the same 5% but, the negative comments were reduced to 20% of 92 thousand visitors. Moreover, only 5% of those only were very much dissatisfied.
Overall, the refurbishment surged the number of visitors from 74,000 to 92,000 in a year gap. The positive comments were escalated significantly whereas the negative comments decreased quickly by the visitors in the respective years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82440295746 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504545454545 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 334.8 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.051155868 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.444444444 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4444444444 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311611935682 0.215688989381 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130004926004 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754364661432 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186156049105 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458989457153 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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