The table below shows the consumer durables (telephone, refrigerator, etc.) owned in
Britain from 1972 to 1983.
The chart shows that the percentage of British households with a range of consumer
durables steadily increased between 1972 and 1983. The greatest increase was in
telephone ownership, rising from 42% in 1972 to 77% in 1983. Next came central heating ownership, rising from 37% of households in 1972 to 64% in 1983. The
percentage of households with a refrigerator rose 2 1 % over the same period and of
those with a washing machine by 14%. Households with vacuum-cleaners.
televisions and dishwashers increased by 8%, 5% and 2% respectively. In 1983. the
year of their introduction, 18% of households had a video recorder.
The significant social changes reflected in the statistics are that over the period the
proportion of British houses with central heating rose from one to two thuds, and of
those with a phone from under a half to over three-quarters. Together with the big
increases in the ownership of washing machines and refrigerators, they are evidence
of both rising living standards and the trend to lifestyles based on comfort and
convenience
- Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorologycollects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to producereliable forecasts.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shownbelow 56
- Advertising is influencing people more and more.Is this a positive or a negative trend? Give your own opinion and examples 56
- the diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. 56
- Now days we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening?What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Televisions
... 14%. Households with vacuum-cleaners. televisions and dishwashers increased by 8%, 5% and...
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Line 6, column 78, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...by 8%, 5% and 2% respectively. In 1983. the year of their introduction, 18% of hou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20114942529 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16209179022 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545977011494 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 67.1121449516 43.030603864 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.555555556 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 5.23603664747 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 12.0 3.83414634146 313% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147099706718 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076530572011 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879691651677 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0490257283128 0.15604864568 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616774674849 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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