The table below shows the costumer durables (telephone, refrigerator, etc.) owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The table illustrate the proportion of household appliances owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983.
It is clear that, the percentage of owning the consumer durables each kind increased in each year. The biggest grow in percentage was telephone and central heating.
In 1972 under 50 percent of family in Britain had telephone and central heating. Over the time, the proportion substantially climbed to 77% with telephone and 64% with the central heating. On the other hand, the percentage of owning television in 1972 was quite high - 93% and continued increasing till 1983 covered 98% households had television. Beside with the covered of television were vacuum cleaner and refrigerator. Vacuum cleaner statistic ended in 1982 but with high rate 95%, while the refrigerator proportion in 1983 was 94%.
Video and dishwasher didn't appear in 1972. Until 1983, the proportion of video just appeared but already occupied 18%. The washing machine percentage was just showed from 1979 with 3% and slightly went up to 5% in 1983 very small number.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'illustrates'.
Suggestion: illustrates
The table illustrate the proportion of household appliances ...
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Line 4, column 64, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t of family in Britain had telephone and central heating. Over the time, the prop...
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Line 4, column 332, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reasing till 1983 covered 98% households had television. Beside with the covered ...
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Line 4, column 388, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
.... Beside with the covered of television were vacuum cleaner and refrigerator. Vacuum...
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Line 4, column 393, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'vacuumed'.
Suggestion: vacuumed
...ide with the covered of television were vacuum cleaner and refrigerator. Vacuum cleane...
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Line 6, column 22, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...n 1983 was 94%. Video and dishwasher didnt appear in 1972. Until 1983, the proport...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19526627219 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71866545726 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585798816568 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6196271761 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8181818182 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3636363636 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150514408169 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062891868919 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648541837561 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116290361101 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078747960283 0.0819641961636 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.