Some people believe that what children watch affects their behavior while others think that the long hours in front of television is the reason for their behavior. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this day and age, with the explosion of technology that bring us to a convenient way to live, but many people think that sort of an invention affects their children's behavior like television. Others don't agree with that statement, they believe that the major affection to the children is what they are watching. In my opinion, what the children are watching is the source of their behavior which in some aspects include the statement relate to the media devices like television. According to many professionals about teaching kid, it is said that most of them are learning from what they are seeing. some of the killing guys in the world have a bad childhood, due to their father usually behavior violent with them or their mother. kids alway start learning the world around them base on their view on how everything work. due to this fact don't do any bad behavior in front of your children like argue, throw rubbish in public,... your children will tend to have same bad behavior when they grow up. nowadays, any families will have at least one television having a lot of channels, any kids will absorb to it. I am no exception when I was a child, but what I got from these was different with many parent thought. I usually watching tv on some channels like discovery, science,... which answer me a lot of question like how a lion look like ? how we can stay balance and go by legs while another species can't do that ? television bring me visual answer to all of that, from that inspire my learning spirit a lot . In conclusion, television is not harmful at all, it like anything in the world that have it bad and good things. what people need to do is curb it's bad and extend it's good.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, while, at least, in conclusion, sort of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51633986928 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44089761543 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542483660131 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2348567508 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.375 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277477695443 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845453858298 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706903948345 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277477695443 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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