The table below shows the figures of imprisonment in 5 countries between 1930 and 1980.
Write a report for a University lecturer describing the information shown below.
The table illustrates, the number of people going to prison in five different countries namely Great Britain, Australia, New Zealand, United States and Canada between 1930 and 1980. Overall, it can be seen that imprisonment figures of United States were highest among all and all except Canada showed an increase in imprisonment rates. units are measured in thousands.
To begin with, in 1930 Canada has highest imprisonment figures of 120000. United States and New Zealand had similar figures of hundred thousands, while Australia's figure was 70000. On the other hand, Great Britain had least number of criminals in prisons about 30000. In 1940 New Zealand and Australia showed the tremendous decline in imprisonment with both had approximately 50000 whereas, Great Britain rate remained constant. Canada figures also went down a little, but United States showed a significant rise with highest figures of 130000.
In 1950, the United States rates fell down again to 100000, and Great Britain rate showed a positive growth of 20000. However, rest of the countries remained unchanged. Great Britain and New Zealand showed a steady increase in rates and reached maximum of 90000 in 1980. Furthermore, Australia's rates also rose overtime till a sudden fall in 1982 to 50000. United States showed a significant rise in 1980 to reach all time highest figures of 140000.Canada showed a downward pattern till a small increase in 1980 with figure of 100000.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 337, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Units
...owed an increase in imprisonment rates. units are measured in thousands. To begin ...
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Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the highest'.
Suggestion: has the highest
...sands. To begin with, in 1930 Canada has highest imprisonment figures of 120000. United ...
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Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the least'.
Suggestion: had the least
...70000. On the other hand, Great Britain had least number of criminals in prisons about 30...
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Line 3, column 514, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the highest'.
Suggestion: with the highest
...United States showed a significant rise with highest figures of 130000. In 1950, the Uni...
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Line 5, column 451, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Canada
...each all time highest figures of 140000.Canada showed a downward pattern till a small ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, whereas, while, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 233.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25321888412 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62853025225 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523605150215 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9796798303 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1538461538 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167181741487 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682824869036 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511628504071 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131129790898 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182304624037 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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