The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and
1980.
Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
The provided bar chart compares the amount of restraints per 1000 cases in particular countries, namely Great Britain, Australia, New Zealand, US and Canada between the period of 1930-1980. The most striking feature is that United States and Canada were the leaders of imprisonment cases over the period.
To start with, the numbers were erratic for all five nations, except for the Great Britain, where the trend was clearly upward during the period of fifty years. The Great Britain, in 1930, illustrated the lowest amount of imprisonment of all surveyed countries, about 30 cases out of 1000. Talking about Australia, there was a steady increase from 1950 to 1970 and stable trend of about 53 cases in 1940 and 1950. In the sector of United States, the numbers fluctuated during the whole period, hitting the peak of the graph at almost 140 out of 1000 in 1980. In New Zealand the amount of restraints declined from 100 in 1930 to 90 in 1980. The cases of imprisonment in Canada fell over the period with some upward movement in 1950.
In summary, the restraint cases in the UK and in the US rose, whereas in other countries they went down, which means that the number of the law breaking actions also decreased.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'so', 'whereas', 'except for', 'in particular', 'in summary', 'talking about', 'to start with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.271186440678 0.268076937826 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.0762711864407 0.116061578633 66% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0635593220339 0.0759168565197 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0338983050847 0.0366838410393 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00423728813559 0.0131127313244 32% => OK
Prepositions: 0.199152542373 0.155750635184 128% => OK
Participles: 0.0169491525424 0.0379272487307 45% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.41753549857 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0127118644068 0.0210936926555 60% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.122881355932 0.0948980150116 129% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00847457627119 0.00967000014798 88% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1215.0 1161.00487805 105% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.9 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75829383886 5.90752243213 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73763899035 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.331753554502 0.337110787985 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.21327014218 0.247514529752 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.142180094787 0.171178102325 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0758293838863 0.112407865282 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41753549857 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545023696682 0.546246751206 100% => OK
Word variations: 49.8205784544 49.3433353143 101% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.4444444444 23.0094962315 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7800851205 42.9750493124 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 135.714022679 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 23.0094962315 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.689975730869 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 44.7714586625 47.7609492067 94% => OK
Elegance: 4.25925925926 2.94281807926 145% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346959063005 0.418131533498 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.185111614751 0.181151798455 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0596594860338 0.0850326197045 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.691161329183 0.706616315825 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.168692295263 0.157042692854 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.205913842652 0.228904883108 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779736557453 0.108899403657 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.568812331016 0.367819155151 155% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0558300890614 0.0812612215331 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.286608823566 0.316326947829 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193199463877 0.0921553760075 21% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70731707317 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.08536585366 49% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 3.16585365854 221% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 7.1512195122 126% => OK
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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