The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and
1980.
Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
The graph below depict the information about captivity in five countries united states,Canada,Newzeland,australia and great bratin in half century since 1930 to 1980.In this essay we will discuss the trends in imprisment in above countries in thousands.
Although, united states imprison were high throughout the table except in 1940 and 1980 where Canada outweigh the US.However,US rate desease along with progression of years from almost one twentythousand to eighty thousnd.Canadaian criminal rate increase with each year and reached the highest of one forty thousand at the end of half century.
In the other three countries newzealand imprisment is highiest as compare to australia and great bratin but far less then Amercia and Canada.In 1930 rate in newzealand is greatest among following years about one hundrad thousand and lowest in after ward two years almost fifty thousand.one the other hand australia captivity decrease in proceeding two years and then increase but at the end of 1980 remains forty five thousand.However,in bratin captivity enhanced successivly in each progressive years and reached upto eighty thousand at the end of half century.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Canada
...aptivity in five countries united states,Canada,Newzeland,australia and great bratin in...
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...countries united states,Canada,Newzeland,australia and great bratin in half century since ...
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Suggestion: In
...atin in half century since 1930 to 1980.In this essay we will discuss the trends i...
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Message: The proper name in singular (Canada) must be used with a third-person verb: 'outweighs'.
Suggestion: outweighs
...le except in 1940 and 1980 where Canada outweigh the US.However,US rate desease along wi...
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Suggestion: However
...0 and 1980 where Canada outweigh the US.However,US rate desease along with progression ...
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Suggestion: , US
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Suggestion: Canadaian
...st one twentythousand to eighty thousnd.Canadaian criminal rate increase with each year a...
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...in but far less then Amercia and Canada.In 1930 rate in newzealand is greatest amo...
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Suggestion: However
...end of 1980 remains forty five thousand.However,in bratin captivity enhanced successivl...
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Suggestion: , in
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55617977528 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.61986568777 2.65546596893 136% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567415730337 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 22.4926829268 262% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.665816324 43.030603864 304% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 329.666666667 112.824112599 292% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.3333333333 22.9334400587 259% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 5.23603664747 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0803819257603 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685748599592 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553412021169 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0685748599592 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553412021169 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.4 13.2329268293 260% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.59 61.2550243902 19% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 10.3012195122 255% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.86 11.4140731707 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.55 8.06136585366 131% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.9970731707 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 11.0658536585 235% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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