The chart shows the date of conviction in thousands in five countries over the period of 50 years from 1930.
Overall, it is apparent that the figure for prisoner rate in Great Britain slightly climbed followed each year, while the proportion of Canadian prisons witnessed a significant decline.
A stable remain was seen in the convictions of Great Britain in the first 10 years, then increasing to 40 thousands in the year 1950. The convictions of Australia witnessed a considerable decline of about 65 thousands in 1930, decreasing to over 40 thousands in 1950. Standing at the same ranking by 100 thousand of the number of prisoners of New Zealand and the US in 1930, the New Zealand imprisonment dramatically declined to almost 60 thousands. After the US prisoners rate significantly climbed to 130 thousands in 1940, decreasing to almost 100 thousands in the next 10 years.
The number of imprisonments fluctuated from 120 to 100 thousands, before declining nearly 80 thousand in 1970. There are a stable remains of Great Britain, Australia and New Zealand in 1970, then decreasing gradually to 50 thousand of the proportion of Australian prisoners and increasing to over 80 thousand of Great Britain and New Zealand conviction in 1980. Compared to the number of imprisonment of the US in 1970, then peaking the highest point by almost 140 thousands in the next 10 years.
- Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 87
- For a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world However nowadays people s values have changed and we tend to consider science technology and business more important than arts What do you think are the causes of this 87
- Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 73
- The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980 79
- Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world However these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science technology and business Why do you think that is What could be done to encourage more pe 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00434782609 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95979677941 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469565217391 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0497845595 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.888888889 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5555555556 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108198562141 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545062825217 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574328583894 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920612486041 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647527528539 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.