The table below shows the hours of leisure time spent by people in different age groups in Someland.
Here, the given table depicts the information about people preferred free time activities in various age brackets in Someland, in hours.
Overall, at a fleeting glance it is clearly visible that watching TV or videos was the most favorite activity among all age groups, while in the sharp contrast cinema was least preferred activity barring elderly whose age is more than 60 years.
A glance at a table illustrates that, more than 1100 hours have been spent while watching TV by children and the age group 70+, while folks range between 20 and 60 years have watched TV between 400 and 700 hours. People with age 30 years have spent 300 hours per year with 4 or fewer people, whilst other age individuals spent more or less than 200 hours. Infants and 20 year old spent their 350 hours with socializing with 4 or more people, however people with more than 20 years have spent less than 50 hours.
All people except 50 and 60 years old have spent more than 100 hours in individual exercise, while group exercise was preferable by young generation up to 20 years with 350 or more hours and other spent less than 200 hours barring 60+ people who had never done group exercise. Lastly, cinema was least favorite for all aged people in which they have spent less than 100 hours only.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, lastly, so, while, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64912280702 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15300401417 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495614035088 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.6824731335 43.030603864 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.428571429 112.824112599 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5714285714 22.9334400587 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254774217581 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148251733248 0.103423049105 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055498988512 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168802728126 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071060739502 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.38 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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