In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?
When greed and selfishness have become rampant, the prevalent of crime is on a rise. Nowadays, number of offence significantly increases. This essay delves the likely causes and some solutions to take over this issue ere a logical conclusion is evolved.
To embark with the causes of a rise in the criminal activities, first and foremost is, the lack of education in many developing countries. Owing to lack funding government of some regions are not able to provide free education for all citizens, and they are likely to become unemployed in their later life. Consequently, need and greed force them to turn into offenders. Along with that, with the advancements in the internet facilities, people are highly influenced by social media platform, and they try to replicate what they show on online platforms. Consequently, children at very young age join to the criminal organizations. To quote an example, recent hike in juvenile delinquency in India is stands as an epitome.
Although however, with some measures this number of crime can bring down. Firstly, authorities can make free and mandatory education for each, and every citizen. As a result, this measure not only reduce the crimes but also minimize the unemployment rate. Secondly, IT defense centers can restrict all activities from Internet which lead people to crime. Lastly, administration can make strict laws against the felon such as execution or lifetime jail etc. As a consequence of that, they will become inspiration to other offenders, and they do not repeat those mistakes again.
On the scrutiny, I conclude that with proper education and enforcement of strict punishment could bring down the criminal activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87514103761 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639705882353 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1158795988 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.25 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177814167853 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493767388625 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451813557427 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899359672709 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480222498451 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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