This table provides us information about two nominal data, genders and preferences related to listening to music in Japan and Tokyo over the previous months. The pie chart illustrates data of people who enjoy live music or recorded music.
Generally, It’s clearly seen that young males listen to music much more regardless of the live music or by MP3 - players or music on the internet than females except CDs. According to the pie chart, it is evident that the vast majority of young people prefer live music compared to recorded music.
Noticeably, a hefty 79% percent of males belong to Mp3 players, while females accounts for only 40 % percent. Although, females make up 44% percent in preference on live music, males’ figure for live music shows considerably more (60 percent) In terms of listening to music on the internet, surprisingly, males again are reported a little more than fifty percent, whereas the proportion for females is account for only 42 percent.
By contrast, the pattern comes reverse when it comes to preference on listening to music on the internet regarding to females. it shows slightly more percent (22 %) while males account for just under twenty percent.
As far as the pie chart concerned, it is significant that the overwhelming majority of people (70%) prefer live music to recorded music, which is rated only 26 percent. A tiny minority of people (4 percent) responded as they don’t know.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06329113924 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66880122902 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552742616034 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 283.868780488 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.1724000368 43.030603864 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 133.333333333 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373069790416 0.215688989381 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175692568986 0.103423049105 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121985184099 0.0843802449381 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245082315605 0.15604864568 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125361264558 0.0819641961636 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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