Currently,some students prefer working and study at the same time.Consequently,it is spent less time for learning and always feel stressed.In my opinion,I agree with this statement, because students start working due to having less money for their needs and the second reason is, the desire to start the carrier earlier than it is expected. However,I belief,that if a student is doing master degree,he is supposed to work while studying.
Having finished school,learners apply for universities and feel extremely happy of becoming a student. However,after completing of first final exam,it’s certainly true that not all students pass exams. And some exams are needed to be retaken. That would mean,students are supposed to pay additionally for their credits and do that exam again. In this case they start looking for a job in a restaurants, hotels or bars to work in the evening after classes.Nonetheless, the main problem is, that a student comes to the classes sleepy and can’t concentrate on new important topics. Psychologists are believed to lead to the stress and anxiety in such condition. The best solution is could be for students to work while holidays and save up money for important cases and focus only on learning. They should prioritize things in terms of importance.
Second reason of working is impatient desire to start carrier and earn money. Moreover,parents do not often allow them to spend that amount of money which they really need. For this reason,especially boys start working without thinking consequences. According to some students’ opinion,the earlier they start,the more professional they become. However,at universities advisors and tutorscould have a talk with students and show the importance on education first and then working.
By contrast,if it is a student doing his master thesis,he needs to work while studying. Because,master means to be an expert not only in theory, but in practice too. As a result, a student graduates the university and gets the Master degree having practice and theory both.
To conclude,students shouldn’t work while studying, as a result it could lead to negative effects both for their learning and health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, look, moreover, nonetheless, really, second, so, then, while, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38550724638 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32864698928 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568115942029 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9281253377 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7894736842 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1578947368 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68421052632 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253838636904 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752015261268 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560769146172 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146050224783 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319672323956 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.